Red Hot Light goes to disneyland!
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Red Hot Light goes to disneyland!
Chapter 1
Good morning!
One summer morning, Red Hot Light woke up with a joyful feeling. She smiled, got her slippers on, and walked to the dinner table.
Part 2 coming as soon as i can figure out what to write !!!
Good morning!
One summer morning, Red Hot Light woke up with a joyful feeling. She smiled, got her slippers on, and walked to the dinner table.
Said Red Hot Light.Good morning, Mom! What's for breakfast?
Said Red Hot Light's Mom.Good morning. We are having pancakes. But they won't be done for a few more minutes. Why don't you go watch tv for now?
Red Hot Light then walked to the living room, and turned on the TV. She watched Spongebob for about 15 minutes until breakfast was ready. All of a sudden, her mom called her.Okay.
Red Hot Light instantly walked happily to the dinner table, and sat down in a chair. She ate for about 20 minutes, then took a shower. After her shower, she went and sat down on the couch, and turned on the TV.Red Hot Light! Breakfast is ready!!
Part 2 coming as soon as i can figure out what to write !!!
Last edited by Red Hot Light on Thu Aug 04, 2011 2:19 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Needed to change the topic title.)
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Chapter 2!!!
Chapter 2
The Surprise
As Red Hot Light started to change the channel, she heard her Mom.
Said Red Hot Light.
then Red Hot Light went upstairs.
Chapter 3 coming pretty soon !!!
The Surprise
As Red Hot Light started to change the channel, she heard her Mom.
Said Red Hot Light's momRed Hot Light! Come here!
Yes ma'am.
Said Red Hot Light.
then Red Hot Light went upstairs.
What do you need, mom?
Red Hot Light then gasped in delight as she thought to herself "Disneyland?? that sounds AWESOME!!! "I have a surprise for you. We have been saving up on money for a few months, and we're going to Disneyland!!
How long are we staying down there, Mom?
Red ot Light then ran into her room, after grabbing her Red colored suitcase. She giggled until her cheeks hurt! Then Red Hot Light thought "Wow... my first time at Disneyland! I wonder what it's going to be like ...." After a few minutes of finding fashionable outfits and accessories, Red Hot Light then ran downstairs and sat down, waiting for her parents to finish packing.We are staying for 3 days. So make sure to pack enough clothes, if not extra, just in case.
Chapter 3 coming pretty soon !!!
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Re: Red Hot Light goes to disneyland!
These are just my opinions: I don't like how the story is made. All the dialogue are in quotes which make it a little big. And you forgot to use a grammar/spell checker I can see. And when writing stories, make sure you have an exciting plot. The forums are closing soon, too...
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WHUUUUTTTTT!?!?!? NAOOOOOOOOO TT-TT TEH FORUMS R CLOSING!!!!Lightning Pirate wrote:These are just my opinions: I don't like how the story is made. All the dialogue are in quotes which make it a little big. And you forgot to use a grammar/spell checker I can see. And when writing stories, make sure you have an exciting plot. The forums are closing soon, too...
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OHMAGOSHES THE FORUMS ARE CLOSING?!?!
Ohmagoshes are they rly closing down ? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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Cant think of anything
I can't think of anything to write. anyone got any ideas? xD
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