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Warrior cat story

Post  Richest Light on Thu May 12, 2011 5:24 pm

Characters:
Ashesstar
HollyStream
RichFlight
Pirateeye
Boltkit
Natpool
ShimmerShine
SparkHeart
Lightkit
Crosskit
Ellifekit
LilPaw
Kasspaw
CharmPelt (queen)
Luckpaw
Housie (used to be cat pet) (queen)
Will have more really soon!

Now lets start chapter Badger dreamed:
Shimmershine and Sparkheart saw a badger. They quickly rushed to tell richflight, and Natpool
They went. Then they saw the badger was fighting Pirateeye well she tried to help.
They all went. “Thank you for keeping is distracted.” Said shimmershine. Shimmershine started to bite the badger while Richflight got her claws our and fought it. Luckpaw was just walking around enough to see the fight. She meowed “I think they need some help.” But did she dare? Yes she did. She ran into the fight and got hurt. But. She was ok. She ran to tell Kasspaw but them she saw Natpool had gotten hurt She rushed to Natpool quickly. And asked “Natpool? Are you ok!?!” But she got no answer… She thought. I hope this is a dream. So she asked Richflight if it was a dream. “Im afraid not.” Replied Richflight. All the cats gathered around Natpool. As the warriors asked star clan to bring natpool back. They knew Natpool was there best warrior. “Im afraid, im afraid she is gone. Starclan has made there decision and theres no getting her back” AshesStar said sadly. “But if shes gone who will be the star when you might not be there?” Richflight asked. “Well, I’ve made my decision and, Pirateeye will be the star when im gone” Replied Ashesstar. At that right time in another area… Housie got kits. Named Dreamkit Icekit and Flowerkit. Ashesstar just got there in time to see the kits. Richflight just had to say. “I think….. I will name there warriors! Flowerflight, Iceflower and Dreameye.” Said Richflight just wanting to say. “I think those are great names! But, Ashesstar picks.” Said Housie;
To be continued? O: ummmmm… this is my first warriors story sorry if its bad.. this is chapter one
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Post  Kayii on Thu May 12, 2011 5:27 pm

Omg.. I simply love this story.. So sad Natpool died ; - ; Can i be Dreamkit now (if its a tom i wanna be flowerkit)
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Post  GoodluckCharrmxLightAngel on Thu May 12, 2011 5:29 pm

This is really entertaining.. I cant wait till next chapter!
Charmpelt expects kits still? :O
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Post  Richest Light on Thu May 12, 2011 5:31 pm

Thankyou! Im gonna make the next chapter really soon. @Charmpelt. Yes. she still is. But. you dont know whats gonna happen...
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Post  Lightning Pirate on Thu May 12, 2011 5:33 pm

You did a nice job Rich! Would you like some constructive critisicm for tips on making stories?

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Post  Richest Light on Thu May 12, 2011 5:47 pm

Characters:
All before except
Flowerkit
Dreamkit
And Icekit

Chapter 2 the danger of cats:
Hollystream was walking by a place called “Badger zone” She kept going even though she was afraid. She saw a badger named Ocean. She bit it and clawed it. The badger jumped at her. But she jumped back. Hollystream was tired but she would be risking her life by sleeping. So she clawed the badger. The badger was so close to hurting her, but Hollystream jumped back saying. “Theres nothing more entertaining then a tired badger” Just then the badger jumped at her, she quickly jumped away.
She bit the badger. And it was defeated. Hollystream thought.. “This seems really hard” So hollystream quickly left the badger zone. She started to run and she just ran into Richflight “Hello richflight!” Said Hollystream “Hello hollystream.” Replied Richflight. Richflight said “Theres an intruder on territory.” “Intruder on territory?” Replied Hollystream. “Yes. It is a star. Darkstar leader of Viola clan” Richflight replied. Hollystream said “Ill go get our best warriors” “Ok. Meet back here” So, Hollystream went off. Hollystream asked Shimmershine, Sparkheart, and Pirateeye to follow her. They followed and saw darkstar. “Darkstar is really good at fighting.. I don’t know about this.” Said Sparkheart. They still went into the fight. They all clawed her and bit her. But then Darkstar jumped to hollystream and clawed her. “I don’t think im ok.” Hollystream said. As quick as that darkstar pushed Hollystream off a cliff and into a lake. Then. She went up into star clan (;-Wink “What did you do to hollystream!?” Pirateeye said angry. “I did what im supposed to in a battle.” “And I will do the same to you.” Just then Ashesstar knocked darkstar off the cliff. “What happened to hollystream?” Asked ashesstar. “She went to star clan. I guess its just best to let her go.” Said richflight “After all the great years of her turning from a kit to warrior with me, I guess my memories are over.” Cried Richflight as she ran away.
To be continued.
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Post  Kayii on Thu May 12, 2011 5:49 pm

I feel sad for Hollystream and Richflight. Poor richflight misses hollystream alittle to much. But. I would be sad if the actual Hollister did go to heaven or we call in warriors star clan.
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Post  GoodluckCharrmxLightAngel on Thu May 12, 2011 5:50 pm

poooorrrr richflight and hollystream ;(
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LOL

Post  goodlucklight on Fri May 13, 2011 3:28 am

(Am I supposed to be Luckpaw?)
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Post  Richest Light on Fri May 13, 2011 1:42 pm

goodlucklight wrote:(Am I supposed to be Luckpaw?)
yep lol... Now a warrior.... Luckflower ._.
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Post  Richest Light on Fri May 13, 2011 1:51 pm

New characters:
Glimmershine
Sailstripe

Chapter 1 White faith to Black faith
Crosskit was walking around, just when she saw a scary sight. Like she had a vision of the future. Her in star clan. Crosskit didn’t do anything. She just kept walking. Crosskit was scared. Sailstripe saw crosskit walking around. “Crosskit? What are you doing out here?” Asked Sailstripe. “I, I, I.” Just before Crosskit could finish, she saw a badger. The badger bit crosskit and clawed her. “Crosskit!?!” Yelled Sailstripe. “What did you do to Crosskit!?!” Sailstripe attacked the badger like she never had attacked a badger before. Sailstripe was angry. The sky began to come to grey when she finished them. Pirateeye ran to Sailstripe and Crosskit “This cant be..” Pirateeye said “Its like all the enemies attacked the warriors at once.” “Do you know why they attacked crosskit.” Interupted Sailstripe. “No, but she is a kit. She was a brave one though, and I think were all gonna miss her” Said Pirateeye. Just then Sparkheart and Shimmershine came. “Its to late…” Cried Sparkheart. “Its to late too do what?” Asked Sailstripe. “Its too late to save crosskit…” Replied Sparkheart starting to look sad. “Star clan makes no mistakes…” Said Shimmershine. To be continued!
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