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Post  Lightning Pirate on Tue May 17, 2011 8:50 pm

Here's a story of a girl, and something amazing happens to her. Lets say it has to do with cat ears...


Prologue
There was a neighborhood with many, many houses that all looked so fine. One particular house, yes, that house was very special. It may not seem like it, but it was. The lawn was mowed and the hedges were trimmed. The leaves were raked and the flowers were watered. It may seem like a normal house with a normal family inside.

But, inside this house, has a very special girl. Something extraordinary happened to her. The girls name is Marie. She is 14 years old. She has a little brother named Kevin, a mother named Lola and a father named Dylan and a male cat named Rufus. Marie had a normal life, until one night.

Marie ran down the stairs, brushing her hair. After she put her hair into a ponytail, she grabbed her backpack and said goodbye to her family. Passing the kitchen to get her lunch which was in a brown bag, she ran out the door. Last day of school Marie thought.

Chapter 1 [Mother I'm home!]
Introduction #2?

Inside the normal house, the front door handle was moving. The door flew open, Marie standing at the doorstep. She walked inside, while taking off her backpack. The expression on her face did not show anything. Kind of like a 'nothing exciting happened' look. She put her backpack where it was before school.

"Mom, I'm home!" Marie shouted. She heard nothing in reply. She walked into the kitchen and looked at the refrigerator, where she often found notes.

Marie,

Out doing errands. Take care of the cat, do your chores and do your homework. Will not be back in awhile.


Below that her mother listed her chores, like she usually does. "Rufus!" Marie shouted. She left the kitchen and walked through the dining room into the living room. It had an average sized television, a fireplace with vases and picture frames on top of it, and two sofas and a loveseat. A cat bed was next to the loveseat. A silver ball of fur was in the fuzzy cat bed. Oh, he's sleeping. Marie thought.

Marie walked into the kitchen to get a snack. She took an apple out of the fruit bowl and got a granola bar. She got milk out of the refrigerator and poured it into a glass cup. After she prepared her snack, she starting digging in.

End of Chapter 1. Don't worry, the excitement is coming soon


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Post  Shimmerstar on Tue May 17, 2011 8:51 pm

I love this so far.
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Post  Lightning Pirate on Wed May 18, 2011 4:16 am

Chapter 2 [Sweet Dreams]
It begins.

After Marie's snack, she did some of her chores. She opened a cupboard and got out a box. She carried the box over to a grey food dish. The name RUFUS was marked on the dish. As soon as Marie was done filling the dish with the pellets, the big silver ball of fur was now moving towards it.

Rufus began eating the pellets. After that, Marie picked up another dish that was next to the one now filled with pellets. She carried it to the sink and filled it with clear, filtered water. She set the water dish next to Rufus.

After Marie's chores...

"Looks like I'm all done." Marie said to herself. She yawned and stretched after she puts a broom into a small closet. She walked upstairs, slowly and lazily. She didn't even notice her family was not home yet.

She walked through the short hallway, into her bedroom. She laid down on her twin bed. The sheets had pandas on them, and the blanket had mice on them. She fell asleep instantly.

Looking out the window...

A single star appeared in the sky. It twinkled ever so brightly. Out of nowhere, the star's light went into Marie's bedroom. A ghost-like figure came down from the star into the bedroom. It looked furry and small. Could it be... a cat?

Marie wasn't aware of what was happening. The figure got closer and closer to Marie. When it reached the bed, it jumped up onto it and it licked Marie's hair. Marie suddenly opened her eyes. They looked fierce and wild... they were cat eyes!

Marie didn't get up, she just closed her eyes and was still asleep. The 'cat' jumped off the bed and went into the light from the star, and vanished out of nowhere. The star disappeared out of the sky.

Note(s):
Something terrible happened to her family. Let's say she's an orphan and doesn't know it yet.

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Post  HulaChan on Wed May 18, 2011 11:06 am

Ooo~ Hula likey~ =w=
Please continue?? :3
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Post  Guest on Wed May 18, 2011 11:18 am

Ugh i wish i was sparkz apprentice Sad

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Post  Lightning Pirate on Wed May 18, 2011 2:32 pm

Maybe you can, glimmer >:3

Thanks Hula & Shimmystar! I'll post chapter 3 tonight.

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Post  Lightning Pirate on Wed May 18, 2011 7:30 pm

Marie's Appearance
Height: 6' 3'' in inches
Hair: Tan. To the shoulders.
Eyes: Black.
Outfit: She's always wearing jeans, and in the summer time she wears lacy tank tops and short jeans.

Chapter 3 [Wake Up in the Morning Feeling Like Kitty]
"What happened to me!?"

The sun rose in the sky, shining light through Marie's curtains into her bedroom. It was dawn. Suddenly, Marie's alarm clock went off. Just five more minutes... Marie said to herself. But she got up anyway.

Marie opened her eyes, which were still cat eyes. When she took off her blanket she yawned and stretched. The weird part was, she stretched like a cat. She didn't even seem like she noticed.

When she got out of her bed, she walked to her bathroom half-asleep. She put her minty toothpaste on her toothbrush and brushed her teeth. She was staring right at the mirror, but did not notice she had two furry things on her head. When she was done brushing her teeth, she took her shower towel and turned on the water.

"Why does this water feel so bad!?" Marie yelled from the bathroom.

In Marie's bedroom...

Mews could be heard outside Marie's window. If you looked out it, you could see a kitten in her backyard. When Marie finished dressing out of her shower, she walked into her bedroom, hearing the mews from the kitten.

Marie looked out her window, spotting the kitten. Immediately she ran downstairs out the back door. The kitten mewed something to her. "What?" She said confusedly to the kitten. Then she had a shocked look on her face.

"Wait... How did I just understand you!?" Marie said loudly. The kitten mewed something to her again. She slowly raised her hands to the top of her head and felt the two furry things. Marie screamed, which probably got a lot of attention. Luckily, nobody looked into her backyard, but that was normal because she screamed a lot.

"I had a dream I was suppose to come here," The kitten mewed to her. "But I didn't know the she-cat I was going to find was a twoleg!" It said twoleg insultingly. Marie was still freaked out, and seemed as if she wasn't paying attention to the kitten.

"OK, Marie... Calm down... You just have cat ears and is talking to a cat..." She mumbled to herself. Then she looked at the kitten.

"My name is Alleypaw. I'm an apprentice of LightClan." Alleypaw told Marie. "Also, I had to bring someone along. Come on out Mewheart!" A she-cat jumped over the fence in one leap. She had silver fur with some white and had grey eyes.

"This is Mewheart, my mentor. I had to bring her along," Alleypaw explained. "Mewheart, this is... What's your name?"

"Marie is my name." She told Alleypaw. She still had a shocked look on her face, though. Mewheart walked up to Marie and sniffed her. "So... It's a twoleg? And we're going to have to bring her with us?" Mewheart meowed calmly.

Alleypaw looked at Mewheart. "Yes, but we need to. StarClan told me it's important." Alleypaw explained to Mewheart.

Marie stared at the two cats. "Take me with you!? Why would you need to do that?" She shouted. But of course, not too loud, so others won't hear.

Alleypaw looked behind Marie. "That's why..." He said. Marie looked behind her and saw a silver tail, matching her ears. All Marie did was look at it shocked.

Note(s): (Edited)
I'll edit this post tomorrow to add the next part, unless someone posts, then I'll just make it in a new post. So just come back tomorrow for the next part. EDIT: New part added. Also, I decided to change all the main clan's names in this.
ThunderClan = LightClan
RiverClan = LeafClan
ShadowClan = SavageClan
WindClan = MoonClan
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Re: Cat Ears (Fanfic)

Post  HulaChan on Thu May 19, 2011 9:55 am

Wait, didn't Marie tell Alleypaw her name twice? Or was she talking to a different cat?

By the way, do you accept signups? I have a warriors cat Razz
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Post  Lightning Pirate on Thu May 19, 2011 4:58 pm

LOL bad memory. I'll edit that.

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Post  Lightning Pirate on Thu May 19, 2011 11:04 pm

Chapter 4 [Venture Into the Wild]
Meet Shimmercloud.

Alleypaw giggled at Marie's surprised look. "Tails aren't so bad..." Alleypaw mewed, and pawed his tail gently. Marie looked at Alleypaw with her fierce cat eyes.

"If this is all true... What would you do with me if you took me to wherever you live?" Marie asked. Alleypaw shrugged and looked at Mewheart.

Mewheart suggested, "We could tell Shimmercloud that we found you, Marie, and she can decide what to do next," Alleypaw and Marie looked at each other, thinking of the idea. Alleypaw nodded his head, agreeing to it.

Mewheart padded to the fence and hopped on top of it. "Well? Are you coming or what?" She meowed. Alleypaw chased after her, and Marie did more slowly. When she reached the fence, she stepped back a little and jumped onto the top. "Well done Marie!" Mewheart complimented her. Marie had more than cat-like features, she had some cat-like skills too.

All three of them, Mewheart, Alleypaw and Marie, disappeared into the forest. They ran through the forest, passed many tall trees. When they were near camp, they stopped at the entrance. "Last time I saw Shimmercloud, she was talking to Ashstar about some stuff." Alleypaw started. "Let's go strait to Shimmercloud's den without being seen by anybody."

Mewheart walked along the edge of their camp, followed by Marie and Alleypaw. Shimmercloud's den had a hole in the wall, Alleypaw knew, so they could slip into the den. "Who's Shimmercloud?" Marie asked Alleypaw quietly.

"Shimmercloud is our medicine cat. She helps heal the clan." Alleypaw explained. "And Ashstar is our leader." He continued. Alleypaw went passed Mewheart and slipped into the hole. He signaled his tail to tell Marie to stay there. He and Mewheart padded into Shimmercloud's den.

Shimmercloud, a long-furred pretty cream-colored she-cat, was organizing her herbs. "Dock, goldenrod, juniper..." She mumbled to herself. She was not aware that Alleypaw and Mewheart were approaching her, she was so interested in her herbs. As the two got closer, her fur suddenly bristled on her neck. "Who's there?" She meowed as she jumped into the air from the surprise.

"It's just us, Shimmercloud." Mewheart told her calmly. Shimmercloud licked the fur on her neck and took a deep breath to calm herself.

Shimmercloud turned around and looked at the two cats. "What are you here for?" Shimmercloud asked.

"We found the she-cat from your dream, but she's not really a... cat..." Alleypaw explained. "Follow me, Shimmercloud," Alleypaw brought Shimmercloud to the hole while Mewheart guarded incase a cat came into the medicine cat den.

"Oh my..." Shimmercloud meowed when she saw Marie. All Marie did was look shy and wave at her. "She's a TWOL-" Her meow was cut off with Alleypaw's paw.

"Don't let anyone know we're here!" Alleypaw hissed quietly at her. "If you make one big noise, the entire clan could hear you!" He exclaimed. He took his paw off her mouth and Shimmercloud just looked at Marie with an open mouth.

Note(s):
I wanted to say I've been indenting the paragraphs, just you can't put indents on here, so... yeah.

Shimmercloud:

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Post  HulaChan on Fri May 20, 2011 4:35 am

Oooh~ The medicine cats are always my favorites.. I think I like Shimmercloud already ^^
Did you see my question I asked earlier? I asked if you accept sign-ups.. I have a Warrior cat~ :3
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Post  Lightning Pirate on Fri May 20, 2011 4:56 am

Sure. I decided all the cats for LightClan so they can be apart of a different clan.

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Post  HulaChan on Fri May 20, 2011 11:19 am

Okay Razz She can be in any clan...
And her name has light in it... You can change Light to Angel if that causes problems.
Here's her info:

Name: Lightkit (Lightwing) [or Angelkit (Angelwing) if you need to change it]
Gender: Female
Age: 2 moons
Parents: Unknown, killed shortly after Light was born.
Personality: Adventurous, easily curious but can become very serious, naive
Other: She is easily lazy which is why she dreams to be a medicine cat when she grows up. She also wishes she could stay as a kit forever, as she believes they can get away with anything and be carefree.
Appearence:

Eyes:

It's kind of a blu-ish purple mix.. That's why I got a picture to show you~
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Meh Signup ;P

Post  Island-Lightland on Fri May 20, 2011 4:11 pm

Name: LandWave
Gender: Female
Age: 9
Personality: Nice, Friendly, Gets kind of annoyed and mean when angry
Other: Likes to be in charge, But not too much. Don't want to be queen of the world .-.
Appearence:
http://illiweb.com/fa/pbucket.gif


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Post  Lightning Pirate on Fri May 20, 2011 4:26 pm

Land, cats don't have full names. They have one name like... Cutefeather, Littleheart, Squirrelheart...

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Post  HulaChan on Fri May 20, 2011 4:43 pm

Is my Lightkit form okay? Surprised
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Post  Lightning Pirate on Fri May 20, 2011 4:48 pm

Yeah, it is. I'll make them Angelkit because... you know... Lightkit Razz

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Post  Lightning Pirate on Fri May 20, 2011 4:55 pm

Chapter 5 [Mrrowww!]
Pure shock.

"A she-cat that lives near catnip is the light source..." Shimmercloud mumbled. There was an awkward pause. "I can tell she is the one!" She exclaimed. The three of them looked at the hole. Meows could be heard inside the den. Shimmercloud slipped into the hole, but Alleypaw and Marie knew they needed to stay.

"Oh, Sparkflight, Ashstar! What a... surprise!" Could be heard from the den. "Why are you here?" The voice said again. More meows could be heard from the den, but Alleypaw and Marie couldn't hear them.

Shimmercloud came out of the hole, followed by two other cats. The first one was a chocolate tabby and the other was a silver tabby. Shimmercloud looked very nervous, and the two tabby's had their head raised and eyes closed while following her.

Shimmercloud sat next to Marie on the grass, and the two tabby's opened their eyes. The silver one fell backwards, their head hitting the grass. The chocolate one looked at Marie in pure shock. "I reacted the same..." Shimmercloud meowed nervously.

"She has ears like us, and a tail like us!" The chocolate tabby exclaimed. The silver tabby stood up and investigated Marie's tail. She looked almost scared, she was so freaked out.

Shimmercloud sighed. "Ashstar, Sparkflight, this is... what's your name, dearie?" She asked. Marie looked at the cats around her, very nervous. She was still shocked because she had cat features, and she was talking to cats.

"Marie..." She said nervously. "Mrroww!" She meowed when Sparkflight went by her tail.

"This is Marie. Marie, these are my two nieces, Sparkflight and Ashstar. Sparkflight is our deputy and Ashstar is our leader." Shimmercloud explained to Marie. Mewheart came out of the hole and sat next to Alleypaw, both of them watching the others talk.

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Post  HulaChan on Sat May 21, 2011 5:30 am

Sorry, I thought I had replied to this! But ooh! I wonder what they're going to do about Marie... Please continue! Razz
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Post  Lightning Pirate on Sun May 22, 2011 1:08 am

I haven't made chapter 6 yet, so I'll probably write it tomorrow. I need to start making the paragraphs longer, too.

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Post  Lightning Pirate on Sun May 22, 2011 11:10 pm

Chapter 6 [Whiskers]
Good night Marie!

"The clan must not know you're here." Ashstar meowed to Marie, after taking a deep breath and calming down. Marie held her tail away from Sparkflight, who was curious about it. Suddenly, all the cats looked at Marie's face.

"What's wrong?" Marie asked. Alleypaw pointed to Marie's face. She felt her face and felt something on her cheeks. "Whiskers!" She exclaimed. She had long, white whiskers on her face.

All the cats and Marie looked at Shimmercloud. She shrugged nervously. They all wondered how this was possible, a twoleg to be turning into a cat. It was obviously first time in history, even from the first clan cats roamed the forest from EmpireClan and EgyptianClan. Those were ancient times, when monsters did not roam the Lightningpath and Twolegs were not as much of a problem. Marie was certainly filled with magic, even more than when a kit feels when it first sees the stars.

It was first for Alleypaw and Mewheart to notice that the golden rays of the sun were beaming from the horizon. Marie had at once noticed that a day in the forest goes by fast. Sparkflight, Ashstar and Shimmercloud had an uneasy look going on. Alleypaw stood onto his paws. "It's almost time for us to go to sleep," The apprentice meowed. He dipped his head to Ashstar respectively and went through the hole in the wall of the medicine cat den and into the clearing. Mewheart followed him. She lashed her tail left to right as she left Marie and the three other cats alone.

Shimmercloud and Ashstar exchanged thoughtful glances on what to do with Marie. Sparkflight stepped forward, making it obvious that she had something to say. "Sister, we must deal with her tomorrow. We should find her a place to sleep, and we continue our lifes for the night." Sparkflight suggested. Ashstar nodded her head in agreement without opening her muzzle to say something. Shimmercloud immediately rose from the earth and padded slowly into the forest beyond. Ashstar signaled with her tail for Marie to follow, so she did as she was told.

Marie stood up and followed Shimmercloud. She was much taller than the living things that usually roamed the forest. She followed Shimmercloud, watching her from above. Very soon Shimmercloud found a large nest that was even big enough to fit Marie. Well, almost. And it was close to camp. It was covered with some leaves and moss was on the ground. Shimmercloud fixed the moss and leaves a bit and Marie came over to where she was. She had to crouch really low to get into it and her feet stuck out of it a little.

"Hope this is good enough." Shimmercloud meowed to Marie. Marie nodded and tried to get more comfortable after Shimmercloud padded away into the bushes and bramble. She fell into thought of what has been going on. It felt like a dream, like it was not real, like she was still in her bed in her home, asleep. The sun's light shone down on Marie, forcing her to grab a leaf and put it in her face, but it was useless. The sun had disappeared into the horizon right after she held the leaf to her face. As soon as the sky was filled with twinkling stars, Marie drifted into sleep.

The moon shone in the sky, the craters visible. The stars danced around in Silvercloud. Cats had gathered around a lake, the water seemingly endless. The reflection of the moon was huge in the clear water. Every cat bent down to lap at the magical liquid. When the felines were finished the lake was half full, as if they drank almost all the water. All the cats returned to the forest, disappearing into the unknown territories. Their scents faded away.

Marie shot up, awake. But something was different.


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Post  HulaChan on Mon May 23, 2011 10:17 am

Oooh... Is she dreaming of StarClan?
Please continue soon~ =w= I wanna know what she found different!
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Post  Lightning Pirate on Mon May 23, 2011 11:15 pm

Chapter 7 [Changed]
Everything will be different!

Marie yawned and looked around her in her moss and leaf bed. She felt much smaller than the night before. The leaves were higher above her head and she was not cramped uncomfortably in the small den. The sun's rays were just glaring through the green forest, shining bright into Marie's fierce, wild eyes.

Marie rose off the ground, not noticing one strange thing. She padded out of the small den and towards the camp where she remembered it from the night before. She smelled many scents, knowing obviously what they were from. She thought of the dream she had that night, which was the first time about cats. She felt the summer leaves crunch beneath her.

The scents were getting closer and closer, then as soon as she knew it she was staring at the back of the medicine cat den. That was when she noticed the thing that was different about her. Her ears, her tail, her snout, her eyes, her fur, her paws... Everything was brand new, except the eyes, ears and and tail of course. She forced herself not to have a heart attack; if that was possible for cats. All she allowed was a large wail of horror.

Marie was not Marie no longer. No, she was a feline. She was not one of those 'twolegs' that the forest cats called them. She had a furry brown pelt with a white chest, arms and grey paws. This was a big change in her life, which was an obvious.

All she did was fall onto the earth unconscious as soon as she saw a blurry figure in the hole of the medicine cat den. The figure was familiar to her until her eyes closed. It ran to Marie, or whatever she was, with a disturbed look on her face. The familiar cat sniffed her and instantly looked like it had an idea. It ran into the hole and some time later came back out with two other cats, Ashstar and an unfamiliar one. It was small with a yellow and white pelt and looked curious and energetic. The three cats dragged Marie into the hole, which was a bit of a challenge but they eventually got her inside the den.

Hours later...
Marie felt whiskers tickling her face, which made her shot her eyes open. As soon as she did, blurry figures ran away yelping in fear. She was confused, she didn't know what was going on. As soon as she recovered from passing out, or whatever cats called it, she instantly knew what was happening. She laid in Shimmercloud's den, which felt quite peaceful.

"You disturbed her sleep!" Hissed a familiar voice from somewhere in the den. She heard paws scrambling out of the den and she smelled something new, and it had a hint of fear in it. She knew that the voice was not meowing to her; it was meowing to the figures that woke her up. She soon remembered who the voice belonged to. It was Shimmercloud, the third cat she had seen and the medicine cat of LightClan, but Marie felt another presence in the den aswell. She saw the small yellow cat gazing into her eyes next to her.

Marie flinched in surprise. The cat staring at her made her feel awkward, but the cat didn't stop. She looked at the entrance of the den; the opposite side of the hole. She saw Shimmercloud and Ashstar meowing up a conversation, but she could not hear anything. The two cats padded over to her, Ashstar in front of Shimmercloud. Shimmercloud flicked her tail at the cat that was next to Marie, and it padded away into a rock in the den, making Marie feel relieved. Ashstar laid down next to her.

"Marie, are you feeling good?" Ashstar asked in a gentle tone. She looked uneasy like the first time they had met.

Note(s):

Marie:

Glimmerpaw:


Also, I changed Marie's appearance on Chapter 3 I think it was.


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Post  HulaChan on Tue May 24, 2011 11:16 am

Ooh, that was bound to happen. I wonder what they'll do with Marie. Razz
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Re: Cat Ears (Fanfic)

Post  Lightning Pirate on Tue May 24, 2011 10:45 pm

I have some writers block, the chapter might be delayed Mad By the way, I edited Chapter 7. Look at the notes.

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